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Nowadays, many people use their

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especially cellphones when walking or even driving.

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causes many dangers to the public in general. The essay below will discuss problems and solutions to

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at length.

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and foremost, reading messages or watching videos while

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causes eyesight problems, especially for the youth. To add, using phones or tablets when walking in public causes unnecessary accidents. If someone is busy on the screen they may bump into other walkers which may cause conflicts.

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, a study conducted in Hongkong showed that about 56% of cases reported in some cities were related to fights resulting from paying too much attention to the screen and the use of headphones.

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, to curb these problems, governments must put laws restricting people from using phones and other

devices

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in public so to avoid unnecessary conflicts.

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on

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issue, the public must be educated about the dangers of using these

devices

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while walking on the streets.

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, in Zimbabwe, there is too much crime and when one exposes their device, thieves may take it away. So if people become aware of

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issues, the number of walkers on the screens may go down. In conclusion, the use of

devices

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while walking on the streets affects the eyes in the future and may cause uncalled conflicts. To deal with

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dilemma, the leaders must educate the community on the dangers of walking while on the phone. Moreso, laws, and penalties must be introduced so to reduce unnecessary fights among citizens. These and other issues have been discussed above.