In some cultures, children are often toldthat they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of given children this message?

Nowadays, many cities are polluted with different materials

such

as plastics and

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paper

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. It is argued that the general public is unable to deal with

this

problem but only the government and large companies. I,

however

, disagree with

this

assertion to a greater extent. The essay below will discuss

this

view at length.

First

and foremost, it is in the hands of citizens to follow laws put by the governments,

therefore

the leaders and business owners can not be the ones to make a difference as it is an individual choice to keep

surroundings

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the surroundings

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clean.

For instance

, in South Africa, there are places where people can recycle dirt, most individuals decide to throw rubbish on the ground noting that picking

trash

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up trash

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is not their job. Cleanliness is a personal choice!

Therefore

, I greatly disagree that people can not do anything to improve their

environment

but the leaders can.

Furthermore

, charity begins at home, adults can teach their children to be environmentally cautious, if

this

becomes a norm

then

cities may become clean.

For example

, in

Tokyo

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,Tokyo

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parents make it a priority to teach young people about keeping the

environment

clean since there is high pollution experienced in the country. A study carried

in

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out in

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this

city in 2016 showed that about 56% of the children were very careful when dealing with their

soroundings

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surroundings

. In

this

regard, I disagree to a greater extent

that

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than

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only the city leaders and large companies can improve the

environment

because Tokyo has proved that individuals can

also

do something. In conclusion, I do not agree that individuals

can not do nothing

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can not do anything

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concerning the state of the

environment

but the government and big companies can.

Firstly

cleanliness is a personal choice,

secondly

, good habits can be taught from home at a tender age.

This

and other issues have been discussed in the essay above.