Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty yearsthat many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? what measures can governments take to discorage people from using their cars?

In the

last

three decades, it is not uncommon to see a significant rise in the

number

of

cars

in the

cities

which has led to huge

traffic

congestion. I believe that

this

notion is true.

This

essay will discuss the various measures by which the government can mitigate

this

issue.

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number

of

people

are buying vehicles,

this

is largely due to better affordability. To elaborate, these days

people

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standard of living in

cities

has improved drastically which has made them capable of buying

cars

.

For example

, due to a boost in

economy

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the economy

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in India, every family residing

at

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New Delhi

,

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has more than one car in their house.

Therefore

,

this

has made a surge in the

traffic

congestion by threefolds on roads. One of the best

way

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ways

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by which

this

situation can be addressed

by

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is by

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development

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the development

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of

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public

transport

system by the government.

This

is because due to lack of the public

transport

individuals are enforced to

use

their

cars

. If better commute facilities,

such

as buses and

train

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trains

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will be available for the public, they will be motivated to

use

them as they are more economical and convenient. To illustrate, in South Korea, due to

well established

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train

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trail

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system, most

of

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the citizens prefer to travel by them because it saves their invaluable time

of

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commuting and money.

As a result

,

people

are less interested to

use

their own vehicles.

In addition

, the government should move the car parks of crucial public

building

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buildings

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and shopping centres

in

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to

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the outskirts. In

otherwords

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other words

,

this

will discourage the

people

to

use

their private

cars

instead

they would prefer

public

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the public

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transport

system.

Consequently

,

this

will reduce the

number

of

autombiles

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automobiles

in

cities

and will eventually solve the problem of

traffic

jams.

For instance

, many South Asian nations followed

this

approach and gained paramount success in curbing

the

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traffic

congestion. In conclusion, In my opinion

number

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the number

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of

cars

has increased drastically during the

last

thirty years.

However

, the

goverment

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government

can tackle

this

issue by improving public

transport

and building car parking

of

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in

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major public buildings outside

cities

.