Mrs barrett,an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs barrett. In your letter •suggest how you could help her in her home •say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available.

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Dear Mrs Barrett, Good morning,my name is Dumebi Ugwu and I'm writing to indicate my interest in working for you in your home

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summer. Generally, I love housekeeping,cooking and doing the laundry as well. So ,I believe I could be of great assistance to you. My school is currently in session but I'm hoping by the end of the session I'll be ready to work.

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offer is what I need to get busy and earn, while I wait for college admissions.

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,I would like to indicate that I will not be available to work on Wednesday and Sunday because these days are when I get to take care of my sick mum in the hospital.

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,I will be available every other day. Please let me know if you need any extra information about me. I very much look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Dumebi ugwu.

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