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After graduation many students take a year to travel. Some think it would be more useful to work for a year. To what extent you agree or disagree

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The tendency to explore the world
instead
 of starting a career just after university is becoming more popular among young
people
.
However
, the idea that
this
 time should be spent working seems more appealing to others. I completely agree with the
last
 opinion for several reasons. To start with, the earlier a person starts to work in a realm that has been chosen conscientiously, the sooner
such
 a worker gains experience which is essential to be promoted. It is known that young
people
 are capable of absorbing knowledge much faster. Despite the fact that it is only one year, it is a vital time for workers to stretch themselves which is bound to lead to becoming either a boss of a department or a company in a shorter period of time.
Secondly
, by having a job workers earn a living.
Although
 money is not considered to be the
first
 emergency, it is almost impossible to survive being poor in
this
 harsh and severe world.
Consequently
, having a proper job but not travelling from country to country,
people
 are likely to become financially secure at a young age as well as to be independent of their parents. All things considered, while it appears to some society that travelling is a better choice for former students than working , I strongly disagree with them. Not only does it help
people
 to achieve their career goals without delay, but
also
 provides them with money which plays a crucial role in success .
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