In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Few experts claim that the government's involvement is crucial in the circumstance of increasing health issues by overrated junk-food eating habits in our society. But For me, I strongly disagree with
this
statement and I would like to explain why.
I have several reasons why I disagree, Linking Words
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, the general preference for an unhealthy diet is due to multiple people's external backgrounds including, low income, an intensive working environment, and a lack of awareness about a healthy diet. Most households with low wages do have not enough money to buy some organic ingredients Linking Words
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as fruits and vegetables. On top of that, few folks do not have sufficient times to eat their proper meals during their working hours. Some jobs require intensive working environments which leads them to choose fast food for their convenience. Linking Words
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, numerous people don't know much about nutrition, so they would like to choose delicious junk food over their health.
In my observations, I believe when that raising the tax on fast meals will lead to starvation in low-income households. As we all know, Linking Words
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unhealthy diet issues cannot easily be solved by reducing the number of people's purchases. But giving more opportunities for those folks to buy organic ingredients will solve Linking Words
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as, giving a discount on the organic meal price, providing financial support, and supporting the improvement of working conditions.
In conclusion, I disagree with Linking Words
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statement about imposing a higher tax on fast food to overcome today's health issues, and I believe there are other options to solve Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite