Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

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rapidly.

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epidemic and

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describe the possible effect of the problem. Lets us begin with the

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and foremost causes of obesity are hectic schedule and unhealthy eating habits. To illustrate In recent

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most people have less time to do

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exercise

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food

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they eat junk

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our body fat

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, the study shows that 50

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of young

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people

eat fast

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basis because they have a habit of

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after that youngsters have hunted of plumpness.

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cause of

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processed

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problems

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serious health diseases. To elaborate In present times most people become

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overweight because they consume more

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and they burn

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because they are

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leisure

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some workout. When they eat unhealthy

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burn

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convert into fat. After

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they suffer from serious health diseases

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as sugar, blood pressure and heart attack. For, instance in England around 100

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die in the whole year due to cause of obesity.

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badly. To conclude, most people become overweight due to their hectic

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and unhealthy lifestyle.

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they suffer from dangerous body problems.