Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?
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scepticisim
that the number of overweight individuals Correct your spelling
scepticism
are
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is
increased
rapidly. Wrong verb form
increasing
This
essay will elucidate the main reasons for this
epidemic and then
describe the possible effect of the problem.
Lets us begin with the first
and foremost causes of obesity are hectic schedule and unhealthy eating habits. To illustrate In recent time
most people have less time to do Fix the agreement mistake
times
exersice
because they work around the clock. So they Correct your spelling
exercise
donot
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don't
do not
makes
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make
food
for themself. After that
they eat junk Add a comma
,that
food
. Junk food
have
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has
a
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an
excees
rate of Correct your spelling
excess
exceed
calories
. Fat food
plays a vital role to
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in
increse
our body fat Correct your spelling
increase
precentages
. Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
For example
, the study shows that 50 percent
of young Change the spelling
per cent
prople
eat fast Correct your spelling
people
food
on regular
basis because they have a habit of Add an article
a regular
this
after that youngsters have hunted of plumpness. Thus
, hectic schedule
are Fix the agreement mistake
schedules
main
cause of Add an article
the main
overweight
and Add a missing verb
being overweight
also
processed food
.
The main effect of this
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these
are
serious health diseases. To elaborate In present times most people become Change the verb form
is
a
overweight because they consume more Remove the article
apply
calories
and they burn less
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fewer
calories
because they are lesiure
and they Correct your spelling
leisure
donot
have a time Correct your spelling
do not
don't
tyo
some workout. When they eat unhealthy Correct your spelling
to
food
and donot
burn Correct your spelling
do not
don't
calories
then
calories
convert into fat. After that
they suffer from serious health diseases Add a comma
,that
such
as sugar, blood pressure and heart attack. For, instance in England around 100 peple
die in the whole year due to cause of obesity. Correct your spelling
people
Hence
, frozen food
effect oue
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our
out
body
badly.
To conclude, most people become overweight due to their hectic Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
schedule
and unhealthy lifestyle. Fix the agreement mistake
schedules
As a result
of this
they suffer from dangerous body problems.Add a comma
,this
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