Today different kinds of advertising influence our life. Do the negative effects of this development outweigh the positive?

Nowadays, we are surrounded by different types of advertising from TV commercials,
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and radio
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adverts to billboards and posters.
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there are different views on the effect of advertising on
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's lives, I think the positive effects outweigh the negative ones. Advertising has positive effects for a variety of reasons.
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, it is a creative industry that employs many
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.
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, a majority of
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are working in
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industries either directly or indirectly.
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,
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the content
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production department as an example; where a large group of employees with different skills conduct
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to understand the customers' tastes and needs before launching a new product.
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, if you don't have time to shop around you can rely on advertising to learn about new products. What I mean is,
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large number of consumers use social networks
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as online shops to guide their purchase decision. So, without advertising, there would be higher unemployment and fewer choices.
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, there are some disadvantages when it comes to influencing peoples' lives. Primary, a lot of adverts create artificial wants.
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,
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often buy things not because of real needs, but due to omnipresent advertisements.
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, children can be easily influenced by adverts, and it leads to putting too much pressure on their parents to buy the most recent toys or clothes.
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, a baby girl may nag for a new Barbie doll to complete her collection. In conclusion, I believe that advertising provides a wide range of choices and decreases joblessness in comparison with the few disadvantages.

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