The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the permanent

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of mobile phones

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there are some who compare their

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with smoking in social contexts,

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as smoking is forbidden in many places they opine that equal measures should be taken with mobile phones.

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, in my opinion, there is no point in common between those two,

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I totally disagree with the idea and

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essay will explain my reasons.

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, smoking is an activity that not only affects the active individual's health but

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the community's because the smoke produced goes to the lounges of everyone doing several

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. For

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reason, when someone is doing it, he or she is

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impacting people that even never

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, if someone who really looks after their health is having a

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every morning

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to a smoker, all the efforts that the

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person has been doing for keeping healthy are being affected and in the future will see consequences, in my

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an unfair

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, the

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of a phone either permanently or eventually affects only the user, it will probably affect their social skills, their vision as well as their attention processes, but the people surrounding them do not have any affectation,

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, the community wellbeing remains intact and without any

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, the manipulation of these

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not export any smell or substance that can bother others and

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could be

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a big difference,

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, no one wants to get a table with the putrid smell of

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in a restaurant. to conclude, in my

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it does not have

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to ban phones in the same way that

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cigarettes

because the consequences when using each one are absolutely different.

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, while the

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of mobiles is negative only for the people

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choices to do it, smoking develops undesirable consequences

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for those who are around and for that reason the problem with

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smoking

is stronger and more

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prejudicial

.