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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

#research #governments #companies
Some people believe that the latest scientific educational program must be organized by the private sector,while others think that public companies should carry them out. I totally agree that scientific research should be done and manageable by governments.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons why
this
 educational program must be developed by governmental institutions.
Firstly
, governmental institutions will focus more on a day to day problems presented in society as the money managed to develop these studies can be invested using governmental funds, as an example, studies in sickness on daily circumstances could start being studied by the public the government and eventually come out with a solution rather than solutions that are privatized nowadays.
Secondly
, research will be of public interest as it will be made by students in governmental centres,
for instance
, the creation and development of robots will be clear for society in terms of functionality and testing compared to being privatized by the opposition sector. Even though I agree with the management and development of scientific research by public institutions. The other side of it will be affected as income will decrease incredibly because patrons will no longer invest in their projects.
However
, if governments can manage the usage of
this
 information and the development of scientific studies, society will grow up united as a consequence of public work.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific research
  • carried out
  • controlled
  • governments
  • private companies
  • unbiased
  • prioritize
  • profit
  • public interest
  • allocate resources
  • lucrative
  • collaboration
  • information sharing
  • confidential
  • competitive advantage
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