Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Marketing strategies nowadays have their own pros and cons. There are
people
who say it only cost us to spend money on useless things
, while others see it to be helpful in things
that may contribute to our daily living. This
essay will argue that advertisements tell us about new products
that may improve our lives.
People
are sometimes deceived by these advertisements. Businessmen will really make their way just to earn which will lead other people
to be deceived by their products
. For example
, ads
on our Facebook sometimes appear in our news feeds which also
sometimes encourages us through their low price strategies. Because of the low price offered, people
tend to buy those products
though they don't really need them. Therefore
, these ads
encourage people
to buy that product even without thinking their
usage of it.
On the other side, publishing business Change preposition
about their
ads
will somehow help us to know products
that may be helpful for a specific task. People
who are not fond of reading magazines will surely enjoy watching tv commercial ads
. For example
, TV commercials mostly show trends in technology these days. A newly improvised floor map with a squeezer will surely encourage people
, for it may give lighter tasks in mapping the floor. Therefore
, these business ads
, somehow help people
to discover new things
which will, later on, has a good contribution.
In conclusion, this
essay argued that some people
say, advertising encourages people
to buy things
which are unnecessary, while other people
say that it tells us about new products
that we needed to discover. In my opinion, I agree that advertising helps us in discovering new products
which may be helpful to our lives.Submitted by shielanyann on
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