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Today, in spite of the scientifically proven necessity of life-long learning, the idea that innate intelligence (thinking skills) is enough to have a successful life is dominating the minds of people. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Now the idea is gaining strength that innate intelligence is sufficient to not learn throughout life.
This
 essay will discuss the main cause and solution. Obviously, in recent times, society has been moving more and more towards a hedonistic way of life. Presumably, the idea of ​​not needing lifelong learning stems from
this
 trend.
People
 do not want to learn, so they look for reasons
or
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reasons to avoid it. The solution to
this
 problem lies in the identification and killing of
people
 who promote
this
 idea.
Thus
, we can get rid of lazy
people
 and set an example for wavering
people
. Since ancient times, it has been known that if you cut off an infected limb, which in
this
 case are
people
 who think so,
then
 the spread will stop. In conclusion, the main reason for the appearance of
such
 delusions is human laziness and unwillingness to learn, and
this
 problem can be solved in the simplest way,
that is
, by killing.
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