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Some experts claim that most of the outstanding innovations and breakthroughs have been made by people with a high level of so-called ‘innate intelligence’. What are the advantages and disadvantages of relying on this theory in order to succeed in life for an ordinary people?

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Nowadays the kind of experts
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 that
people
 with
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high level
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innate
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intelligence
 do the majority of all innovations and breakthroughs.
This
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about
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main minus and plus of believing
this
theory
by
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common
people
. The main advantage of
this
theory
 is an opportunity to inspire the person by
this
 to reach new peaks. According to primary psychology, everyone
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 to count himself as a unique one, thereby
this
theory
 will only back their self-esteem and motivate them to become innovator
,
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 because they already have what is needed for that in their opinion. Napoleon Bonapart can be an example of
this
,
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 since he always believed he was born to change the world. The dark side of relying on
this
theory
 is that
people
 may be looped on
intelligence
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 they were born with, so won’t develop their lifelong
intelligence
. It is possible that some very strong adepts of
this
theory
 decide that congenital
intelligence
 is all they need to succeed,
however
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 it is
evident
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 delusion. In conclusion,
this
 phenomenon has both positive and negative sides in the faces of
people
 inspiring and misleading them.
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