Paying all workers the same salary in a company promotes harmony and repect among colleagues To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, among people are some who opine that if
workers
get paid an equal pay, Use synonyms
this
would improve team working and enhance respect among them. Linking Words
Although
I respect Linking Words
others
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others'
other's
point
of view, I Fix the agreement mistake
points
definately
disagree with Correct your spelling
definitely
this
notion as it would bring more tension among them and Linking Words
this
might be disastrous to any company. Linking Words
This
essay will Linking Words
further
discuss how and will Linking Words
also
give a logical conclusion.
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Firstly
, it is unfair to pay all employees who work in the same firm an equal amount of pay. Linking Words
This
is due to the fact that they have Linking Words
different
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a different
the different
background
. Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
In addition
, they do not have the same years of experience. In my company Linking Words
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for
instance, I have ten years of experience, while my colleagues have only two years of experience. Add the comma(s)
,for
Moreover
, I hold a Linking Words
bachelor
degree in chemistry, whereas they do not hold any degree, though. If companies paid equal Change noun form
bachelor's
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to all Change the capitalization
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workers
, there would be no need for good Use synonyms
workers
to exert more effort Use synonyms
at
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in
workplace
and Add an article
the workplace
this
could increase tension among them. Linking Words
As a result
, many Linking Words
workers
may lose interest and they will not be expected to help each other or to be creative.
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Secondly
, paying all Linking Words
workers
the same wage might be disastrous to any work environment. In fact, it could increase disrespect among teammates. Use synonyms
For example
, they might refuse to help each other to get the job done swiftly as Linking Words
it
used to be. Correct pronoun usage
they
Furthermore
, many of them would feel Linking Words
unjustice
which could worsen the work atmosphere, especially those who have unique and rare skills. Correct your spelling
injustice
Thus
, they might decide to leave their firm. Linking Words
Consequently
, a sharp decrease in productivity and profitability could be Linking Words
undoubtely
expected. For Correct your spelling
undoubtedly
this
reason, I disagree with Linking Words
this
view.
In conclusion, Even though some might think that giving all team members in a company the same income could be beneficial, I doubt that without hesitation as it would be unfair and could be devastating to any Linking Words
assosiation
.Correct your spelling
association
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