Paying all workers the same salary in a company promotes harmony and repect among colleagues To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, among people are some who opine that if
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get paid an equal pay,
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would improve team working and enhance respect among them.
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I respect
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of view, I
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disagree with
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notion as it would bring more tension among them and
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might be disastrous to any company.
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discuss how and will
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give a logical conclusion.
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, it is unfair to pay all employees who work in the same firm an equal amount of pay.
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is due to the fact that they have
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educational
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.
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, they do not have the same years of experience. In my company
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instance, I have ten years of experience, while my colleagues have only two years of experience.
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, I hold a
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degree in chemistry, whereas they do not hold any degree, though. If companies paid equal
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to all
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, there would be no need for good
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to exert more effort
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and
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could increase tension among them.
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, many
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may lose interest and they will not be expected to help each other or to be creative.
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, paying all
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the same wage might be disastrous to any work environment. In fact, it could increase disrespect among teammates.
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, they might refuse to help each other to get the job done swiftly as
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used to be.
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, many of them would feel
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which could worsen the work atmosphere, especially those who have unique and rare skills.
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, they might decide to leave their firm.
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, a sharp decrease in productivity and profitability could be
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expected. For
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reason, I disagree with
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view. In conclusion, Even though some might think that giving all team members in a company the same income could be beneficial, I doubt that without hesitation as it would be unfair and could be devastating to any
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