Many people believe that nature plays a more significant impact on human adult intelligence, while others claim that an individual can train himself to become high-intelligent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many individuals feel that
nature
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has a greater
influence
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on mature human intellect, while others believe that a
person
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may teach himself to be very brilliant. I think that human
nature
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has a more significant effect on the
intelligence
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of an
adult
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. In
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situation, it would seem that the personality of an
adult
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person
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has developed largely under the
influence
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of the
parents'
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genes
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. The crux of the
nature
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controversy is that genetics or other natural influences are
largely
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, if not entirely, responsible for characteristics related to a
person
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's personality,
behavior
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, and
intelligence
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.
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, the
genes
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responsible for
intelligence
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are included in the category of mother and father
genes
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, so in
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they tested the mental data of 200 thousand people aged 14 to 22 years.
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, 40
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of adults have inherited the natural gifts of their ancestors.
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, some of the
upbringing
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largely argue that children
develop mental
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developmental
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abilities or tendencies
to
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certain
behaviors
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.
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, the main contributor to a
person
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's development is the
influence
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of the people, events, and learnings that interact with that
person
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throughout his or her life.
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, adults may show actions
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as deduction or unusual thinking that cannot be explained because neither parent exhibits the same trait, but can be explained by the work and personal experience of an
adult
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. To conclude,
adult
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intelligence
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can be influenced by both
nature
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and nurture. In my opinion,
genes
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have a greater
influence
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on an
adult
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's
intelligence
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than nurture.
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