Nowadays,
people
chose to live in
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rental houses
instead
of
purchaseWrong verb form
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one with too much money.
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people
agree and
with
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, but others disagree. I will discuss the negative and positive aspects below.
On the one hand, it is no doubt that
rentWrong verb form
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homes
meansChange the verb form
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more
flexibleReplace the word
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and freedom for youth, so that they can alter their job or move to another city anytime without any
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.
For example
,
people
will choose
furnituresChange the wording
furniture
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instead
of high value or private-design items, which
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not only easy to take away but
also
with Change preposition
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low price.
Moreover
,
people
will have more budget to do anything their want,
such
as register
a Change preposition
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high degree course, learn interest skills or set up
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because they
are not undertakeChange the verb form
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the pressure from
house
debt, which we call
house
slave.
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the other hand, it is commonly believed that
rent
is steadily increasing during the past few years and will continue
such
tendency in future, which will
also
become
economyReplace the word
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pressure
forChange preposition
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people
. Take the
first
-tier
cities
,
for instance
.
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big
cities
, especially the
first
-tier
cities
, with lots of labour
pourWrong verb form
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in, the living cost and
rent
isChange the verb form
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sharply rising up.
Besides
,
to some countries
culture, it is an important signal that you can buy a big
house
in big
cities
to confirm you are living in a good condition and make money.
Furthermore
, once you buy a
house
, you have the chance to apply
kindergardenChange preposition
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and primary school for your child in some countries. Under
such
, it is necessary to buy a home
thus
it may bring overweight economic pressure.
In conclusion, there are negative and positive aspects for
rent
homes, and
people
should make
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decisionFix the agreement mistake
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regarding their
and current
economyReplace the word
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.