Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with trade, health and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

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It is suggested by some people that wealthy
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ought to help poor
countries
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in different kinds of sectors
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as business, health as well as
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. If questioned, I agree with
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viewpoint. I would discuss my viewpoint with some examples in the following paragraphs. Rich
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have many methods to help underdeveloped
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in terms of business, but the suitable way is that help to establish manufacturing centres. Because of that poor nation's economy will be stable and local residents of that nation will get employment.
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Mongolia
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" is a country that uplifted its economical growth with help of China. Because China had established more than 50 manufacturing centres in
Mongolia
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.
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, the People of
Mongolia
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got employment, and the production of goods increased steadily. So
Mongolia
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's economy moved toward stabilization.
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, the affluent
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can help needy
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related to the
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sector in different ways.
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, they can donate books and computers;
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, they can help with establishing the school:
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, they can send tutors from their country for teaching purposes. Apart from the trade and
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sectors, the
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-world
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can help in the healthcare sector through different methods.
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of all, poor
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not suitable health structures. So the western world should send medicines and medical machinery.
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, the mankind of economically collapsed
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is not aware of the diet and sanitation.
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, developed
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should organize camps and provide training
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nutrition and hygiene. To conclude, it can be commented that, industrialized
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play an indispensable role in assisting developing
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in dealing with essential areas
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as health,
education
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, and trade.
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