You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter o Say what the participant liked about the hotel. o Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. o Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you in response to the article the
book
the influenced me most printed in the
last
15Sue of your magazine, as it was stated there that you would be waiting for readers' contributions. Having noticed
this
, I couldn't have failed
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an opportunity to share my experience. So, the
book
that literally turned my world upside down is called "Nina", by an
italian
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author writing under the pen name of Moony Witcher. The
book
was about a girl who suddenly found out that her grandfather had not only been a great alchemist but had
also
kept saving the world from an evil mage. And it was her turn to take up his task and save all the children's dreams and fantasies from complete extinction. I was twelve when I cracked
this
book
open and I was completely lost in an interesting plot and a breathtaking philosophy concerning Good and Evil,
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Creation
and Destruction, Everything and Nothing.
This
book
had a great influence on me as a writer, it encouraged me to try writing fantasy stories and made me
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person that I am now. I would advise reading
this
book
to everyone from age. 8 to 16, as it is sure to be very beneficial for children's upbringing and to teach them some good things in a very interesting way. Best regards,
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