Towns and cities should be divided into zones so that all the schools are in one area, all the shopping malls are located together and all the industrial sites are situated close to each other. To what extent do you agree that urban areas should be split into distinct zones?

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should be separated into different zones.

Therefore

, shopping malls, schools and

factories

should be located in particularly divided

areas

. I completely agree with the statement, and I will outline the reasons for my viewpoint. The possible benefits of zone separation can be considered for several reasons. The

first

and most important one is that it offers

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safety

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humans. Because the schools gathered in one area being separated from

factories

could be suitable for students to avoid the accidents occurring from the trucks driving around.

In addition

, it is better for the industrial sites located close together to contact and do business due to

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short distance of transportation.

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, the countryside called Rayong in Thailand has various kinds of industries

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one location.

Moreover

, not only is the assembling of certain sites together good for citizens and

factories

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it

also

allows the governments to focus on specific types of development

in particular

areas

.

For example

, the government can easily provide public facilities

such

as parks for people to exercise.

Also

, the road or trains for business transportation would

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significantly.

Besides

, the

tourism

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towns

where

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attract visitors by

civilization

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of the town would be affected if the shopping malls are surrounded by industrial

factories

instead

of other shopping

centers

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.

As a result

, the town lack

of

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income generated from tourists because they prefer more organized towns. To conclude, the locations

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which facilities and industries are constructed

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important to be taken into account for the

advantages

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of individuals, the companies, and the governments. In my opinion, I think it is correct to separate the

areas

for each purpose so every unit gets its own positive outcomes.