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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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In the past years ago, the development of urbanisation has
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grown considerably together with the demand
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 habitats. In
addtion
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addition
, the environmental resources are used in order to
sastisfy
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satisfy
 the
people
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 needs. These actions likely lead to many problems ;
such
 as,
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increasing
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 in global temperature,
flood
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, drought, etc. .
People
 sometimes don't know what are they doing and how it affects the surrounding atmosphere.
Hence
,
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clear communication from someone who has enough authority must take charge in
this
 situation, in
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,
government
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.
Government
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 plays
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and
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 important role to deal with the environmental
problem
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government
 is the one who has
such
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a power to issue some strict measures and make
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declaration
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 about the
problem
. There are
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plenty of conveying methods to aware
people
 of the problems;
for instance
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some countries decide to include
tax
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in
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 any materials composed of carbon.
This
 action could lead to environmental
problem
 awareness in advance in
people
. Another way is to simply broadcast. Even though
government
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 has done
a great work
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, it is useless if
people
 still use the same daily life as before.
People
 could enhance the
government
 measure by using public transportation than
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vehicle
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, filtering water before
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 in the canal. In conclusion, The environmental issues
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 been
occured
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occurred
occupied
 for a while by human activities.
This
 is not just an individual
problem
 ,but
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 of us.
Thus
 we need to express our responsibility together in order to
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 the disaster.
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