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Most agree that we should be training children to recycle waste to preserve the Earth’s natural resources. However, some believe that it is parents who should teach their children to recycle waste while others feels schools are more responsible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#children #waste #earth’s #resources #believe #parents #schools
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Waste
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 is one of the contributions to global warming because it can release greenhouse gases from landfills.
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 educating
children
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 about
waste
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 management is important to protect the Earth’s natural resources. Regarding
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, some argue that
parents
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 should educate their
children
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 while others believe that school does. To my view, I believe that
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parents
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 and
schools
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 have the same responsibility to teach
children
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 about recycling
waste
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. I will explain
both
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 sides to prove my argument. On the one side,
parents
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 have
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role
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 to educate their kids outside educational institutions. They should actively participate to guide their kids to practice the process of recycling
waste
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 in their homes.
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, if there is an empty jam jar, by
parents
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’ guidance, kids can clean, paint, and use the jar as new storage for candles.
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parents
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 have an essential
role
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 to guide and supervise
children
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 to recycle
waste
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 in their daily life. On the other side,
schools
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also
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 have
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role
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 to teach
children
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, specifically formal education.
Schools
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 should have a curriculum about recycling
waste
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 at each education level. Teachers will give a basic class that consists of the theories and simple practices.
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, when a teacher gives knowledge about the process of recycling
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 and the important function of
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 process, students will be aware and easily obey because it is natural that students
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believe their teacher.
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schools
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 have
also
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 an important
role
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 in educating
children
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. In conclusion,
both
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parents
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 and teachers have the same essential
role
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 to educate
children
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 about the ways of recycling
waste
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. Because
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 are
role
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 models for
children
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.
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 my view can be supported.
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, it should be considered that
parents
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 and teachers should communicate with each other to monitor
children
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’s progress.
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