some people say that the only reason fro learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in forgin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should lern a foregin language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few individuals explain that, knowing an international dialect is important for tourism and work, whereas many
in contrast
have argued that understanding other
nations
'
tone
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can be beneficial for other purposes in our lives. From my perspective, knowing more than one
language
opens up many possibilities in work as well as in personal life.
firstly
, those who put pressure on an argument,
language
is a necessity for those who wanted to study in the
first
world countries or establish an impeccable placement title in
another
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another nation
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nations
, think there is no use of that
language
in our country.
Moreover
, time spent on mastering
new
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dialect can be used for other skills that are paramount for the development of the individual.
In addition
, these people have the notion that the local
language
is only needed for doing all the work here.
For example
- in
the
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country like China, having an in-depth knowledge of English is not useful in any part, because
in
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this
land, nationals speak Chinese only.
Also
, they use Chinese in their all products information manuals, considering that, those people never need
a
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knowledge of any other
language
.
However
, others who do not agree with that allegation, and consider there are other great benefits to knowing other than own nation's
language
.
Furthermore
, they consider, knowing even one of many international
language
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opens up possibilities for personal growth.
Also
, by understanding neighbouring
nations
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nations'
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speech, we can acknowledge their culture better.
For instance
, in Canada, french is the
second
language
, if anyone wanted to understand the culture better from nearby
nations
, understanding
of
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french brings an improvement in
relationship
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the relationship
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with Canadians. I am in
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favour
faver
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of
this
view, as
this
gives
a
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more opportunities to
exlpore
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explore
the world. In conclusion,
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are numerous advantages we can get by knowing more than our mother's tone. I have
notion
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the notion
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that,
although
,
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the
second
language
is not giving any gain in the country we live in, if one's seek for growth in life, they should master
forgin
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foreign
forging
language
.
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