Some people think that the public health of a country can be improved if the government makes laws regarding nutritious food. Others think that it is a matter of personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Obesity has become a severe problem in many developed countries like the United Kingdom. Some
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argue that governments should implement laws related to nutritious
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, while others believe that it is individuals' freedom to eat what they want and it is their obligation to improve their own health, and I agree with the latter's viewpoint. Some
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argue that policymakers should implement regulations to encourage
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to consume more nutritious
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.
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, governments could mandate all restaurants to include
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healthier
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their menu. In
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way, diners will have more options and the likelihood of them having junk
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could be reduced. On top of that, politicians could
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make it compulsory for restaurant owners to include more nutritious ingredients in their
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such
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as tomatoes and carrots which are rich in vitamins,
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, they will face harsh penalties.
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, no matter what individuals ordered, they will enjoy a
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nutritious
meal.
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, I hold the view that rules and regulations are not good enough to improve public health. Ultimately, consumers have
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to decide what they like for their
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, a better way to improve public
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is to raise their awareness of a balanced diet as well as the drawbacks of eating junk
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all the time. Knowing that consuming junk
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that contains high cholesterol and sugar would lead to high blood pressure, heart attack and stroke, the mass would be more inclined to reduce their consumption. In conclusion, whereas it is true that
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legislations
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will contribute positively to
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's health by providing
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which have less sugar and fats, I argue that
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approach is not adequate.To enhance
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's
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, governments should launch campaigns to increase their awareness of the impacts of an unhealthy diet.
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,
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would automatically switch to a balanced diet.
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