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Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?

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Over the recent years, there have been many
developments
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 regarding
space
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exploration
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. These advances are regarded, by many, as a success for all mankind.
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, there are some who argue that not every country had a role in
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developments
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. In my view,
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 a few
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 are the forerunners in cosmos science,
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 movement has encouraged many other
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 to establish initiatives on
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exploration
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. Exploring outer
space
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 has long been one of the main objectives of human beings. It is their natural instinct to conquer their surrounding environment.
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 had not been possible until the 20th century when
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 as Russia and the US acquired the knowledge of building spaceships and rockets to explore the skies above. It might be true that the competition between the two
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 was some kind of a cold war, but their advances made all the people around the world proud of the human race.
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, those
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 raised the interest of other nations to start investing in
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 research. In fact,
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exploration
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 requires high-tech equipment and sophisticated knowledge.
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, being able to travel to
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 or sending rockets containing probes means that a country has become a developed one.
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, it can bring joy and pride to that nation.
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, more and more
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 are engaged in
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exploration
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, and many projects in NASA,
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, are led by several
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. In conclusion, outstanding
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 of human beings can make the majority of the world population happy whether it is carried out by a single country or a group of them.
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, I think that these
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 will encourage more
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 to get involved in
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exploration
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 and many future projects will be done internationally.
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