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Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?

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Over the recent years, there have been many
developments
 regarding
space
exploration
. These advances are regarded, by many, as a success for all mankind.
However
, there are some who argue that not every country had a role in
such
developments
. In my view,
although
 a few
countries
 are the forerunners in cosmos science,
this
 movement has encouraged many other
countries
 to establish initiatives on
space
exploration
. Exploring outer
space
 has long been one of the main objectives of human beings. It is their natural instinct to conquer their surrounding environment.
This
 had not been possible until the 20th century when
countries
such
 as Russia and the US acquired the knowledge of building spaceships and rockets to explore the skies above. It might be true that the competition between the two
countries
 was some kind of a cold war, but their advances made all the people around the world proud of the human race.
Similarly
, those
developments
 raised the interest of other nations to start investing in
space
 research. In fact,
space
exploration
 requires high-tech equipment and sophisticated knowledge.
Therefore
, being able to travel to
space
 or sending rockets containing probes means that a country has become a developed one.
Moreover
, it can bring joy and pride to that nation.
As a result
, more and more
countries
 are engaged in
space
exploration
, and many projects in NASA,
for example
, are led by several
countries
. In conclusion, outstanding
developments
 of human beings can make the majority of the world population happy whether it is carried out by a single country or a group of them.
In addition
, I think that these
developments
 will encourage more
countries
 to get involved in
space
exploration
 and many future projects will be done internationally.
Submitted by babak.ranjgar on

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