Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
In
this
contemporary life, a number of people
living a sedentary life; they consume beverages and snacks having
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with having
significant
amount of sugary content which Add an article
a significant
predispose
to many health issues. Individuals should be motivated by Correct subject-verb agreement
predisposes
cost
augmentation of Correct article usage
the cost
such
products
to keep them fit and fine. I partially agree to
the given notion as Change preposition
with
high
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the high
cost
can impact Fix the agreement mistake
costs
lifestyle
of average Add an article
the lifestyle
people
.
Due to Correct article usage
an extravagance
extravagance
lifestyle, Replace the word
extravagant
people
consume outside foods having sugar
as the main ingredient, and by consuming such
food and drinks
they are welcoming disease
like Diabetes. Levying a high Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
cost
on such
products
can not only limit the
usage of them but Change the word
their
also
spread awareness of the
perilous impact of it. Change the word
their
For example
, if the government increase the cost
of beverages contain
more Wrong verb form
containing
sugar
, individuals may stop drinking it
and find alternate healthy Correct pronoun usage
them
drinks
. Therefore
, increasing cost
of sweetener Correct article usage
the cost
products
can keep people
safe from different health issues.
However
, most of the shops are selling sugary products
as it is tasty and people
can easily afford it
. Making it expensive can still not make any difference to an opulent public, but one who Correct pronoun usage
them
work
hard to regulate their home might not Change the verb form
works
comfortable
with Add a missing verb
be comfortable
high
price. Correct article usage
the high
Majority
of the average Correct article usage
The majority
people
, for instance
, consume such
foods and drinks
while celebrating particular
occasion, and for Add an article
a particular
the particular
them
it will be just an extra burden of Add a comma
,them
cost
. Hence
, rather than selling sugary products
on
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at
high
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a high
price
, an alternate solution to make Fix the agreement mistake
prices
sugar
free diet should be approached.
In conclusion, people
are more habituated to eat
packed food and Wrong verb form
eating
drinks
which contains a plethora of sugar
, and by Inhaling it, one may cause serious diseases. Make
sugary items expensive can be a solution; Wrong verb form
Making
nevertheless
, it will be an additional cost
of
the Change preposition
for
people
who still use such
food occasionally.Submitted by hvyas on
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