Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their health. Do you agree or disagree?

Most individuals are of the opinion that learning institutions rarely educate youngsters on personal healthcare. In my opinion,

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partially agree because, while

health

education

is compulsory in some

schools

,it is considered irrelevant in other

schools

. On the one hand,several high

schools

ensure that healthcare

education

is compulsory.

This

simply means that

health

education

and other related topics are taught as a subject in some

schools

as a form of creating awareness on that topic.

For example

,in a school where

health

topics are considered essential,70 per cent of the students are constantly conscious of their well-being ,whereas ,the adoption of

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creates an impact on each individual.

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,it shouldn't be a distraction

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what the main purpose of

education

entails in general.

On the other hand

,it is perceived as irrelevant. Other subjects like mathematics,business studies and computer studies, are considered

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more insightful and educative than educating children about how to take care of their

health

.

For instance

, in a technical college where mathematics and other science-related subjects are mandatory,

health

education

comes in as time-consuming ,

therefore

,the instructor's attention is focused on the goal.

In addition

,students of these

schools

tend to miss out on the importance of maintaining

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good personal hygiene .

Finally

,in my opinion,creating

health

awareness in

schools

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important and should not be scrapped out completely in an educational platform.

instead

the importance should be widely spread by teachers.

Also

,

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should help in ensuring that topics related to

health

are considered relevant in

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ground,which will result

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its significance

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spread in the society.