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Many animals today are being hunted to the point of extinction. What can be done to tackle this problem?

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Many
animals
 today are being hunted to the point of extinction. What can be done to tackle
this
 problem? These days, hunting is to be considered
as
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a sign of bravery around the world,
as a result
, many
animals
 are at the point of eradication.
However
, various measures could be implemented by the government and individuals to tackle
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, the
first
 solution is, the schools should be attached the balance of ecology in their's curriculum,
therefore
,
since
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 growing age, the children might be known about the importance of
organism
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organisms
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 and their's
habitat
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habitats
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 and everything. Another solution to be considered, the authority should be provided laws against hunting
animals
such
 as imposing fines,
long
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and long
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 term imprisonment who poachers.
For example
, in Kenya parliament has passed a law against the hunters
such
 as a $1000 fine and 7 years imprisonment,
as a result
, they can save more and more creatures from the hunter.
Moreover
, the individuals should not be bought the products from often killed
animals
 skins products
such
 as making leather goods, medical
purpose
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,
ornamental
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or ornamental
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 things. Another possible solution is,
the
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 individuals should not be killed by any beast who is the other.
For example
, when a poacher tries to hunt any beast in the surrounding place, other people should inform the nearest authority office in order to protect the extinction of fauna. To conclude, only when the school will be attached
syllabus
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how
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 fauna plays an integral role
for
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 our planet and the government passes the strict law by imposing heavy fines and imprisonment, will the issue will be solved. I hope these are the steps that can be stopped hunting in order to might be protected our species from
disappearances
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disappearance
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.
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