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Some experts claim that most of the outstanding innovations and breakthroughs have been made by people with a high level of so-called ‘innate intelligence’. What are the advantages and disadvantages of relying on this theory in order to succeed in life for an ordinary people?

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Some specialists assert that
people
 with innate high intellect have
been
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committed
majority
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 of the remarkable novelties and breakthroughs. Adhering
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 theory for
ordinary
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an ordinary
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person
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people
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 will make life easier, but
also
 will confine
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from
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 new opportunities. One evident benefit
from
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 having
this
 rule in mind is that
people
 without inborn high intelligence can be free of charge.
In other words
,
ordinary
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an ordinary
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individual
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 have
not
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 need to learn, discover and invent new things because it is all responsibility of intellectuals. It means that less capable ones have
right
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 to not
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concern
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 about
humanity
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 future.
Consequently
,
average
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the average
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 person will focus on
own
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their own
his own
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 business and his/him
life
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of
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will become more pleasant. So, it is
convenient
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 way in order to become
fruitful
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a fruitful
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 person in life.
On the other hand
,
non geniuses
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 by birth will not have sufficient odds to improve their thinking skills. It
also
 implies that smart
people
 will develop themselves, while others will stay as they were. Owners of innate intelligence will make inventions, while others will not have success in the scientific world. There will no motivation to grow intellectually, to learn new studies, and to hard-work for achievements in minds of
ordinary
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community
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. It means millions of lost potentials and dormant great brains that can be helpful for humanity. To conclude, thinking that innovations are only for
people
 with high intelligence helps
to
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 pay attention to ourselves and
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to
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do
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 not
concern
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 about
future
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the future
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 of humanity without
your
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apply
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great breakthroughs.
However
, it destroys chances for
people
 without inborn intellect.
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