Many animals today are being hunted to the point of extinction. What can be done to tackle this problem?

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animals have become vital creatures in our ecosystem.
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,the most critical issue is now going.
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faunas have
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enormously by humans in
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today
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. As some people think
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work to hunt species in
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. Wherever humans are
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using to produce medicines, ornaments and other creations by hunting animals.
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essay will focus on what are the flexible recommendations for
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detrimental issues?
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overcome
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problem. As long as responsible law sectors have
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to vanish
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issue by making strict standard punishments.
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government have implemented people who engage in wildlife smuggled, they are paid 10000 by lea sectors.
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, I assume that plans and schemes are more essential and beneficial to
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wildlife trafficking
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the globe.
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, local authorities must want to organize awareness programmes
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people and
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will assist to get
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for face to these issues.
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, schools and colleges should
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children
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of animal diversity to our
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environment.
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, In Srilanka school children have studied ecology subject from grade 1 to grade 11 and
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subject is mandatory in their school curriculum.
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assistance
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our greenery environment and they try to break these brutal issues from
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manner. In conclusion, as a
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we want to follow these laws to eliminate
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pronlem
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. In my perspective, unless we give our concern to faunas, we will not able to save them for our future generations.
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, I believe these steps are really plausible to alleviate in our life.
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