In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products for instance, clothing and medicines. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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There has been much discussion regarding the use of
animals
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for
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such
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as clothes, food, medicines, etc. While some assert that animal
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are not necessary anymore in the modern world, and others insist animal
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are irreplaceable and indispensable, I hold the opinion in between, in some industries like
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in livestock for food or dairy
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are crucial for human beings but in lines like clothing or
medicines
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animal
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could be replaced.
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, animal
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are the infrastructure of diet structure and source of nutrients. It has a long history for Humans using
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for meat or dairy
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.
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, the livestock industry which provides thousands of foodstuffs for tables and countless workers are working in related lines all around the world.
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it is true that humans could possibly consume a diet free of animal
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, the cost of replacement might be too expensive for everyone to obtain and the result of the industry collapse might be too heavy for people in society to bear.
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, substitutes should be found to replace animal
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in sectors like clothing or medicine. A huge number of
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were slaughtered each year for their skin,
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, using fur skin for clothing is not essential nowadays since non-animal related goods with the same function are able to provide under the developed technology.
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, Artificial fur or leather has advantages both economically and aesthetically,
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, manmade leather could vary in colours and functions, is easy to take care of and is much cheaper than animal fur.
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, the replacement
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applies to medicine, the animal product elements could be extracted from herbs or chemical reactions in drug factories. So, in areas like these, animal
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should be substituted. To conclude, in the sectors where animal resources are the foundation of the system,
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as food, animal
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should not be obsolete, but for areas like clothing or medicine, where replacements are much easier to get, animal
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should be banned.
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