A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe • what the book was about explain • how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir, I'm writing

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letter in reference to your request to provide

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from its readers for an article called 'The

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that influenced me most' for your magazine and I would like to take

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opportunity and provide details on the

book

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that influenced me the most. My name is Savita Srinivasan and the

book

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that influenced me the most is 'Stay hungry Stay foolish' by Rashmi Bansal.

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insights

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most

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entrepreneur.

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book

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contains

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the struggle

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struggle

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of people like Sanjeev Bhikchandani the founder of 'naukri.com' or Aman Gupta the owner of headphone company 'Boat'.

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book

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is really an inspiration for the people who want to do something different or for themself.

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book

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guided me in a way that no matter how big the problem is like financially or mentally, I will get through it. It helped me to think out of the box and figure out a way to deal with the situation. I personally feel that after reading

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title, many will be influenced and will be able to get themself out of an entangled circumstance. With

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like to tell

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title is available on audible. I hope

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information was sufficient. Should you require any

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information

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you can write me back on the same. Yours Faithfully Savita Srinivasan

nehasanchitbhutani

May 6, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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231 words

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contributions
readers
'The Alchemist'
Paulo Coelho
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journey
personal legend
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life lessons
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themes
following one's heart
seeking adventure
embracing the unknown
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