A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe • what the book was about explain • how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir, I'm writing
this
letter in reference to your request to provide
contribution
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from its readers for an article called 'The
book
that influenced me most' for your magazine and I would like to take
this
opportunity and provide details on the
book
that influenced me the most. My name is Savita Srinivasan and the
book
that influenced me the most is 'Stay hungry Stay foolish' by Rashmi Bansal.
This
is a title which
provide
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insights
of
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most
of
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apply

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the
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apply

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entrepreneur.
For instance
, the
book
contains
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the struggle

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struggle
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of people like Sanjeev Bhikchandani the founder of 'naukri.com' or Aman Gupta the owner of headphone company 'Boat'.
This
book
is really an inspiration for the people who want to do something different or for themself.
This
book
guided me in a way that no matter how big the problem is like financially or mentally, I will get through it. It helped me to think out of the box and figure out a way to deal with the situation. I personally feel that after reading
this
title, many will be influenced and will be able to get themself out of an entangled circumstance. With
that
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I would
also
like to tell
that
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you that

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this
title is available on audible. I hope
this
information was sufficient. Should you require any
further
information
then
you can write me back on the same. Yours Faithfully Savita Srinivasan
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