A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe • what the book was about explain • how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir, I'm writing

this

letter in reference to your request to provide

contribution

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from its readers for an article called 'The

book

that influenced me most' for your magazine and I would like to take

this

opportunity and provide details on the

book

that influenced me the most. My name is Savita Srinivasan and the

book

that influenced me the most is 'Stay hungry Stay foolish' by Rashmi Bansal.

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is a title which

provide

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insights

of

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apply

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most

of

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apply

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the

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apply

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entrepreneur.

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, the

book

contains

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the struggle

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struggle

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of people like Sanjeev Bhikchandani the founder of 'naukri.com' or Aman Gupta the owner of headphone company 'Boat'.

This

book

is really an inspiration for the people who want to do something different or for themself.

This

book

guided me in a way that no matter how big the problem is like financially or mentally, I will get through it. It helped me to think out of the box and figure out a way to deal with the situation. I personally feel that after reading

this

title, many will be influenced and will be able to get themself out of an entangled circumstance. With

that

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I would

also

like to tell

that

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you that

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this

title is available on audible. I hope

this

information was sufficient. Should you require any

further

information

then

you can write me back on the same. Yours Faithfully Savita Srinivasan