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Nature has a more significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#nature #impact #adult #intelligence
Self – evolving
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have
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significant
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 role
on
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 human adult
intelligence
 but the essential factor of intellect is nature.
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 concept of
nature
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nature's
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 dominance in
thinking
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the thinking
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 abilities of
person
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a person
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.
Firstly
, everyone
born
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is born
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 equal with each other in terms of anatomy and
secondly
, different
people
realizes
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 their potential variously.
People
 are so different and
same
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 at once because
structure
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 of our
organism
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organisms
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 and organs is
same
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the same
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. Nature doesn’t give
different
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kind
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kinds
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 of
brain
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 to individuals so there is no boost from only nature’s side for
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an attitude
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 of persons thinking capabilities. All of us are representatives of one specie,
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homo sapiens.
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, individuals born at different
time
 periods and
different
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on different
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 continents will have
same
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the same
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 structure for 99.9% which shows that there is no nature’s gift
on
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for
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intelligence
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the intelligence
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 of
person
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the person
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. The main factor that
effects
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affects
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to
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intelligence
 is
ability
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the ability
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 of
person
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a person
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 to allocate his
time
 for self – developing properly. Deeping the knowledge level and gaining experience in life is
main
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 key that results in
brainpower
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the brainpower
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 of
people
. Some
people
 may study a lot and develop themselves in order to outperform previous themselves while others may spend their
time
 on useless doings
as a result
 their
intelligence
indicator
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indicators
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 will differ.
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, adult
people
 which
works
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work
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 in
spheres
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the spheres
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 of science and wasted a lot of
time
 on self-development will have stronger
brain power
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brainpower
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 than regular
people
.
Natures
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Nature's
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 gift for all
of
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people
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the people
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 is
brain
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the brain
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 that can be developed so
way
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the way
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 of realizing
of
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thinking abilities
have
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main
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the main
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 effect on
intelligence
.
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