Many people believe that nature plays a more significant impact on human adult intelligence, while others claim that an individual can train himself to become high-intelligent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people suppose a more crucial effect on human adult intelligence has nature, at the same time other individuals believe that everyone is able to work on themselves in order to become what they want to

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I believe nurture is the most significant part of becoming high-intelligent.

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that are inherited and examples of getting what they want by themselves. It is clear that

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physical and

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mental

abilities

are identified by their genes or DNA.

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can be inherited

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the generation. It was scientifically proven that musical

abilities

are not the exception in

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situation. Hambrick’s studies showed that the genetic influence on musical success was far larger in those who

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more.

Therefore

, some kinds of skills may be inborn.

On the other hand

, cultivation may be a reason

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hard-working and learning

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the way people reach their goals. In

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way, there is a range of examples of getting famous and achieving their dreams without

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of their names. Ed Sheeran is the most relatable model of it. He started his career singing on the roads.

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, learning and training

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also

important in making a name and

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. In conclusion,

although

nature has a great impact on human adult intelligence, it gives only a potential to become a high-intelligence, and training own self may develop

this

potential or

also

create it from scratch and establish it.