You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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in general, teaching

children

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how to be parents is not a good concept, they should enjoy

their

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a moment and play with their tools. but in the world today there is no

mercie

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they destroy the innocent little one. I completely disagree with

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intention, and I will explain it in

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apply

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several ways in

this

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easy

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detail.

firstly

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, when you are a young person you hate what is marriage means and you don'

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like to hear anything related to that topic.

for example

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, when your family or your father ask you do you have boyfriends and you run away or

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shy from that topic. for that reason, studying

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a subject

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subject

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subjects

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related to mother or marriage is so difficult to accept for the

children

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secondly

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, there are a

lot

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children

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who get married at

young

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age and there don'

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have a

lot

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experiences

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in marriage life.

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some

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in some

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country

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countries

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girls get married at a young age without education,

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, their parents don'

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have the

affore

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afore

afford

effort

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school

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to school

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. for any

reasons

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reason

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, there is not a good concept to teach the offspring how to be parents or let them get married at

young

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age. to conclude, it is good for the

children

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to leave their life as babies to play with the toys or be the ancient

humen

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human

. in my opinion, it is so bad design to teach young people about stuff they don'

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understand a lot from it.

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2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

243 words

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What can we learn from the boys' experience about the nature of power and leadership?

Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum children, others think that for all school age children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion,

Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?