Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree?
Some people think that making better
relationship
in the company is not essential because it makes employees not Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
to
concentrate on their Fix the infinitive
apply
work
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, I partly disagree with Linking Words
this
opinion as Linking Words
good
relationship helps Correct article usage
a good
work
efficiency.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, excessive Linking Words
relation
between workers can harm Fix the agreement mistake
relations
atmosphere
in Correct article usage
the atmosphere
workplace
. To illustrate, they may take too much time on relax or chat with their team members if people focus on making Add an article
the workplace
connection
rather than working. Fix the agreement mistake
connections
This
leads to Linking Words
lessen
Change the verb form
lessening
amount
of Add an article
the amount
work
which each Use synonyms
employees
have to do on a day and Change to a singular noun
employee
speed
of Correct article usage
the speed
work
would decline while they working. Use synonyms
Therefore
, company profit would Linking Words
be decrease
because of Change the verb form
be decreased
relationship
.
Correct article usage
the relationship
However
, Good Linking Words
relation
can make high efficiency Fix the agreement mistake
relations
on
Change preposition
in
work
. High connection with co-workers can Use synonyms
leads
to communication skills in the business. Change the verb form
lead
For example
, workers who are junior Linking Words
of
their job can speak their opinions easily to their boss or senior workers. Through Change preposition
in
Linking Words
this
circumstances, Correct determiner usage
these
work
atmosphere and cooperation between team can be better than Use synonyms
strictive
companies.
To concludeCorrect your spelling
restrictive
with
, I believe that it is important to establish Change preposition
apply
high
bond in Add an article
a high
company
as it will make better Add an article
the company
a company
work
efficiency while people Use synonyms
work
in the business. Use synonyms
Therefore
, all companies should invest time Linking Words
for
establishing Change preposition
in
Add an article
a connection
connection
in Fix the agreement mistake
connections
workplace
.Add an article
the workplace
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite