Some people say that now we can see films on mobile phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema, others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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one group thinks that watching movies on their own digital

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is able to replace

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, others argue that

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is more enjoyable. I personally feel that going to a

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would be more exciting and fulfilling.

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with the latter's point of view, they may probably enjoy going

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a public where various people are interested in the same movie and watching it together. More

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can be even more fascinating and enjoyable because each person's reaction can be seen.

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, good time spent with friends or family can be used wisely.

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, going to a

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with new friends is considered a wonderful starter of a relationship.

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, the majority of movies shown in

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cinema

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are new and renowned, unlike the outdated movie

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available online and is shown freely in public.

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device

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as a smartphone or computer is more convenient in terms of location and cost because they are able to see any film on their own without going to other places. The former group can be viewed as cost-saving where they just reduce unnecessary activities out of their daily life.

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, from my perspective, I disagree with

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convenience is a negative habit that can directly affect their physical health, which is eyesight. Compared to the size of the

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's screen,

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kind of

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is extremely small. As small as it gets, the worse eye damage's individual can receive. In conclusion, the former group's view is about convenience in terms of location and cast.

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, the latter may consider mental factors like joyousness and friendship. From my experience, I would say that I enjoy seeing movies shown in a

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rather than on a

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screen because of the reasons I have mentioned previously.