Some people say that now we can see films on mobile phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema, others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While
one group thinks that watching movies on their own digital device
is able to replace cinema
, others argue that cinema
is more enjoyable. I personally feel that going to a cinema
would be more exciting and fulfilling.
To begin
with the latter's point of view, they may probably enjoy going in
a public where various people are interested in the same movie and watching it together. More Change preposition
to
audience
can be even more fascinating and enjoyable because each person's reaction can be seen. Fix the agreement mistake
audiences
In addition
, good time spent with friends or family can be used wisely. For example
, going to a cinema
with new friends is considered a wonderful starter of a relationship. Furthermore
, the majority of movies shown in cinema
are new and renowned, unlike the outdated movie Fix the agreement mistake
cinemas
that is
available online and is shown freely in public.
On the other hand
, own
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owning
device
Correct article usage
a device
such
as a smartphone or computer is more convenient in terms of location and cost because they are able to see any film on their own without going to other places. The former group can be viewed as cost-saving where they just reduce unnecessary activities out of their daily life. However
, from my perspective, I disagree with this
because the way of this
convenience is a negative habit that can directly affect their physical health, which is eyesight. Compared to the size of the cinema
's screen, this
kind of device
is extremely small. As small as it gets, the worse eye damage's individual can receive.
In conclusion, the former group's view is about convenience in terms of location and cast. In contrast
, the latter may consider mental factors like joyousness and friendship. From my experience, I would say that I enjoy seeing movies shown in a cinema
rather than on a device
screen because of the reasons I have mentioned previously.Submitted by mimintiexs on
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