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The picture below shows the plant of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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This
 diagram illustrates many changes that happened in the plant of the museum over 20 years from 1998 to 2008. Overall, everything has been replaced except The permanent Exhibition Rooms on the east side, and the Tickets entrance/ Exit, were still the same without any changes
To begin
 with, in the northwestern of the plant museum there has built a restaurant west of the renewed cafeteria after the addition Bathroom inside the coffee shop.
secondly
, The temporary exhibition room has been from the corner of the south-east to the south of the garden and rebuilt shop and bags and coots from the south-west to south-east
next
 of Ticket entrance on the other side, the east side was demolished everything was empty
last
 but not least, have added some Fountains in the south of the garden, while in the northwest of the corner was a new cafe sitting area to serve the coffee shop, which is in the north of the garden.
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