Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is a debate about learning new dialects. some
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learning the speech of other tongues is only useful when people want to visit that country or it is better to learn the
language
if someone aims to get employed in that country,
otherwise
learning a
second
language
is useless.
However
, other opinions argue that there is a wide range of points in learning a new way of
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I will explain the reasons in detail and I will give my
opinion
in the
next
paragraphs. In the old ,times people were considering foreign dialects as magic.
However
, today perhaps a high proportion of individuals are able to speak two different sorts of languages. On the one hand, I and others who are in the
opinion
that learning a
language
has various causes, argue that individuals may learn a new way of communication for getting familiar with a novel culture. Since every expression hides many secrets of a nation's culture, so one of the best ways of collecting knowledge about a culture is learning the related dialect.
Besides
, many learn other tongues of communicating with their beloved
such
as their extended family or their friends who are living abroad and talking in a different
language
.
For instance
, I learned French because it was my wife's native tongue.
On the other hand
, some think learning a
language
is only could profitable if someone needs to travel or work in that nation.
This
opinion
believes learning another
language
could be time-consuming and if people spend
this
period of learning a new
language
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developing other skills it will provide them with better upsides.
As a result
, it is better to learn a new dialect only if a person wants to work or travel to that country.
Additionally
, there are different sorts of online applications which can translate many languages;
therefore
, learning a dialect for
other purpose
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than working or travelling may be a wasteful activity as there are
such
applications. In conclusion, I am still in the
opinion
that learning a new method of communication may have many other reasons than just travelling or working abroad.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
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