Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only. others however feel cell phones should be used mostly for work. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although
it is something thought that mobile phones ought to be
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be used
use
just for private reasons, other people
think that mobile phone
should be useful mainly for Fix the agreement mistake
phones
work
. In my opinion, I consider for work
, cell
phone
help Fix the agreement mistake
phones
to
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apply
people
to
organize Fix the infinitive
apply
the
daily Change the word
their
work
.
On the one hand, some people
believe that mobile need to be
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be used
use
to work
because often could be a good tool to create Change the verb form
working
a
good team coordination and I agree. Remove the article
apply
In other words
, mobile
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the mobile
phone
has different application
to excel the cooperation between the Fix the agreement mistake
applications
team
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teamwork
work
, consequently
, produces
a better organization. Wrong verb form
producing
For example
, there are works where employees need to send report
every day about the daily objective and daily Fix the agreement mistake
reports
task
, with an application like Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
whatsapp
you can organize the Correct your spelling
WhatsApp
Whatsapp
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teamwork
team
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teamwork
work
and distribute quickly the tasks. Furthermore
, with this
tools Correct determiner usage
these
people
can write instantly email and send to
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them to
another
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other
people
, as a result
, they may have an efficiently
job.
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efficient
On the other hand
, it is often believed that it is better use
the Add the particle
to use
cell
phone
for private reason
. Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
Moreover
, parents always need to know about their children, where they go or what they do every day and cell
phone
could be an excellent tool to control the routine of their children. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
For instance
, children may be controlled with application
to know the Correct article usage
an application
exactly
ubication since the ubication can Change the adverb
exact
be send
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be sent
in
any time of the day.
In conclusion, while Change preposition
at
people
may vary in their opinions, I think that cell
phone
have a better Fix the agreement mistake
phones
use
at work
to have a succeed
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successful
work
and teams could use
this
tool to organize the daily routine at job
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the job
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