The school day should be shorter Agree or Disagree?

Education is the core of a person's

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and schools help in that but they have their cons. I strongly believe that

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must be shorter because children that get smaller academic

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have less weight on their shoulders and they get extra family

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benefitted from these standards they have more leisure

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. Most importantly, the main reason why shorter

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is extremely important is that they relieve tension in pupils. Research clearly shows that 95% of

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are stressed by

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70% of those blamed it on academic

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and said that it started too early or ended too late. Stress is an important factor in grades and studies it can make someone's grade drop significantly because it lowers the concentration of

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. So the only cure is to remove the stress, and shortening

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seamlessly removes

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problem.

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, children will get extra opportunity to spend with family. Family

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is a very important point in pupils' lives because they can learn many

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lessons while schools only teach logical skills. For ,example

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with 1-2

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of family

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every day are 80% smarter than the kids with no family

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. As of the 2022 consensus of kids 76% of

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had none to 30min of family

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the other 24% of

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had 1-2

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of family

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is why they had better marks than the others. Having the right balance between

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and family

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can improve a pupil's marks significantly. What would you do if you spent no

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with your family?

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, we can't forget the

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because they are the ones having to spend over 80% of their teaching career dedicated to

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the other 15% is sleeping and taking care of kids and other things. So that leaves only 5% of the

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to rest and relax. It's eavesdropping to hear that only 5% of someone's

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is relaxing.

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are what take up most of a teacher's

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. Shortening the

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can result in fresher and better

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. More importantly better teachers mean better

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and better

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mean higher achievements. To wrap up, shortening the

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can come with many advantages

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as less stress for

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or for extra family

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. It can

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create better

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. Shorter

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would definitely be appreciated by many

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, families and

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. So all together

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is why academic

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should be shorter.