The school day should be shorter Agree or Disagree?

Education is the core of a person's

life

and schools help in that but they have their cons. I strongly believe that

academy

time

must be shorter because children that get smaller academic

hours

have less weight on their shoulders and they get extra family

time

. In ,addition teachers are

also

benefitted from these standards they have more leisure

time

. Most importantly, the main reason why shorter

academy

time

is extremely important is that they relieve tension in pupils. Research clearly shows that 95% of

students

are stressed by

school

!

Furthermore

70% of those blamed it on academic

hours

and said that it started too early or ended too late. Stress is an important factor in grades and studies it can make someone's grade drop significantly because it lowers the concentration of

students

. So the only cure is to remove the stress, and shortening

academy

time

seamlessly removes

this

problem.

Secondly

, children will get extra opportunity to spend with family. Family

time

is a very important point in pupils' lives because they can learn many

life

lessons while schools only teach logical skills. For ,example

students

with 1-2

hours

of family

time

every day are 80% smarter than the kids with no family

time

. As of the 2022 consensus of kids 76% of

students

had none to 30min of family

time

the other 24% of

students

had 1-2

hours

of family

time

this

is why they had better marks than the others. Having the right balance between

school

and family

time

can improve a pupil's marks significantly. What would you do if you spent no

time

with your family?

Lastly

, we can't forget the

faculty

because they are the ones having to spend over 80% of their teaching career dedicated to

students

. ,

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the other 15% is sleeping and taking care of kids and other things. So that leaves only 5% of the

time

to rest and relax. It's eavesdropping to hear that only 5% of someone's

life

is relaxing.

Academy

days

are what take up most of a teacher's

life

. Shortening the

school

days

can result in fresher and better

faculty

. More importantly better teachers mean better

students

and better

students

mean higher achievements. To wrap up, shortening the

school

days

can come with many advantages

such

as less stress for

students

or for extra family

time

. It can

also

create better

faculty

. Shorter

school

days

would definitely be appreciated by many

students

, families and

faculty

. So all together

this

is why academic

time

should be shorter.