It’s important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Children are the
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they engage
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activities or any other situations without knowledge and they do not try to understand its
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they are penalised by their parents in
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life. Indeed, I do not agree with
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children?
To begin
with, certainly, punishment is not
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to teach right and wrong to younger people. Whenever they are penalised by their adults or teachers
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, they try to release their stress with miserable behaviours.
For example
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% of children are trying to do
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activities when they face too harsh
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Moreover
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they cannot alleviate their emotions and feelings and we want to focus them in
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Furthermore
, a grown can give
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which are not too harsh for youngsters.
For instance
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has broken some glasses at
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new glasses.
Therefore
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responsibilities and good qualities for infants. Whenever we should want to give some useful
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personality skills. In conclusion, parents and school tutors should need to know that punishment is not
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to teach right and wrong for teens but
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there are various productive penalties which help their lives. If we always trust punishment is a good method, we will be not able to produce strong personalities for our future.
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