Some people believe that violence on the television and in computer games has damaging effect on the society.Others deny that these factors have any significant inflence on peoples's behavior. What is yor opinion?

Nowadays, there is no doubt

violence

in media is rising significantly. While some

people

argue that

this

trend

undoubtbely

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undoubtedly

leads negatively for human's life of their future.

On the other hand

, others claim that it has no

dangeros

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dangerous

influence

for

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on

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the

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society

. In my opinion,

however

, I

partialy

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partially

believe that

most

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in most

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cases media

violence

does

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affect

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effect

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affect

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for

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apply

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peoples's

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peoples'

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behavior

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behaviour

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and some of them do not take

personally

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personality

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from fiction stories.

First

and foremost, it is commonly known that spending hours

people

either on the

screan

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screen

as

watcing

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watching

violence

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violent

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movie series or playing on play station and new online

games

have become changes of

pesonality

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personality

.

For example

, who

play

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plays

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addicted activity both above mentioned TV and

games

, he

waste

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much more

time

for those activities and he

spend

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minimal

time

for

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on

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daily normal routines

such

as spend quality

time

with the family and

sibblings

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siblings

. To illustrate, that child might get

easilily

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easily

irritabble

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irritable

or angry and it

developes

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develops

developed

toward

agressive

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aggressive

behavior

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behaviour

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if

parent

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parents

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encouurage

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encourage

encouraged

to

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them to

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engage more

time

for study or go for socialization

,

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because their vision is to anxiously continue to watch that kind of movies or to win the

games

which they do.

Moreover

,

people

can be

coppied

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copied

what they have seen on television especially catching negative

behavior

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behaviour

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.

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,

that

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there was some evidence

on

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in

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the "Times Oman"

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newspaper

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news paper

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that

film

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the film

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called "

Robbot

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Robot

Man" , released and many

people

watced

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watched

in the

cenema

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cinema

in 2020 has brought crucial disadvantage in Omani's community and

clture

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culture

that

grops

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groups

of their national were

distroing

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destroying

distorting

expatriate's properties without major reasons and they wear showing anger towards other

contry

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country

people

and expressed they

capabble

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capable

to do anything negatively and the authorities has to involve to solve that issue on

society

immediately. Despite

this

, there are individuals who do crime or

violence

to

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against

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society

is

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not

link

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linked

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with

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to

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TV shows or computer/video

games

use

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by them. In fact

a

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apply

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behind

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a strong reason

suuch

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such

as his family background. To explore

this

, a child has

the

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a

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father who

adicted

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addicted

alcohol or illegal drugs, he might be abused family members, his wife and children, as a

reslt

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result

perticlar

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particular

child

shwos

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shows

violent

actitute

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attitude

activate

aptitude

towards friends and the

society

due to

pressuure

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pressure

from his abusive father. In conclusion,

althouugh

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although

though

,

people

do reaction to negatively to

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society

result of influence after watching

of

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violence

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violent

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televion

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television

or

games

,

However

, it is important to consider

that

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reason behind other factors as the

person's

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person

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face

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faces

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problems from his family.