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The shown bar chart gives some information about the proportion of fast food which was eaten by USA's people in the restaurants during a decade, from the year 2003 to the year 2013. Overall, most people tended to eat fast food at least once or twice a
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, while a few people were not interested in eating junk food. Notably, the smallest category has belonged to those who had
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 type of cuisine each day.
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 with, during
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 ten-year period of time, most population enjoyed eating at fast cooking restaurants frequently, once or twice a
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 between one out of fifth to almost 40 per cent of dwellers.
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, the two
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 categories have been for citizens who have gone to these eateries several times a
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 or a few times a
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, with between 16 to 20% and under a fifth in all
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 period, respectively.
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, just below five per cent have not had any desire for eating fast meals at all, or they have been obsessed with using constantly these types of fatty foods and
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 has been an eating habit for them.
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, we see that in all these 10 years, folk have followed an approximately similar pattern in the appetites for unhealthy nutrition in
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 country.
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