Nowadays, there is no doubt huge income offers
for the family. While some certain
think that satisfaction at the
is more crucial than
behind
. Others claim that a
salary is important to live a comfortable lifestyle all over the world. In my opinion,
, I believe that in most cases
depends on the
of the
whether he has a family to feed or look after only
him selfCorrect your spelling
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as a single
.
Some people who state that high payable work or profession is necessary in
to have a good life and they might be thinking that because the majority people live in a joint family and most cases whole family depends on one
that father, mother or an adult
family member of their family.
, in most
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the Asian countries, Sri Lanka and India
that Correct determiner usage
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father is the leader of the family and he has to take care of his unemployed wife,
hisCorrect word choice
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children under age 18. Some of the family have around three to five children, not only that
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but
needed some
to look after his parents as well as his brought family members
as unmarried siblings, uncle or aunt.
will clearly
indicatesChange the verb form
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the
importantReplace the word
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of
hugeCorrect article usage
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salary
willCorrect pronoun usage
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always fulfil
type of individual needs. In
others Fix the agreement mistake
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more
needs to gain better and
healthyCorrect quantifier usage
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balanceCorrect your spelling
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life for all the family members. And
big income gives more chances to save
in the banks or buy properties and keep for their future.
,
that Correct word choice
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children require proper higher education and suitable marriage once they complete
educationCorrect article usage
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that
wishChange the verb form
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all parents.
, those who tell that enjoy at their career all the time is more valuable than
earnChange the form of the verb
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a lotsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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of
and he would continue his
with satisfaction and it leads to get more creativity and much more
gain success
the colleagues in the office or between the companies and get the prices.
, some
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the doctors and
psychologistFix the agreement mistake
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say as
evidenceWrong verb form
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in the
,
IfCorrect word choice
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someone once not happy with his career it will automatically effects
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him emotionally and physically.
, he has at
riskAdd an article
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of getting health problems
as diabetes,
of blood pressure and cardiac diseases.
it is considered to think about
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satisfactionsCorrect your spelling
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in their jobs.
In
,
, those who earn
hugeCorrect article usage
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of salary would fulfil the needs of the
and his whole family
dependersCorrect your spelling
depends
defenders
dependents
and
satisfaction make a very important role in
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life and consider it
in toJoin the words
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account.