Pollution is becoming a major environment problem. what are causes and solutions to solve this problem?

Nowadays all kinds of
pollution
affect
environment
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adversely. There are various sources of
pollution
such
as
cars
and
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farming.
However
, we can find some
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to decrease the effect of these sources. Travelling by
cars
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has increased considerably which results in air
pollution
. If an area had a major number of
cars
, the amount of fuel
emission
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emissions
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would rise and make the air
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of
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carbon-dioxide.
This
problem affected adversely not only
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the planet earth
,
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but
also
for
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health.
Moreover
, another type of
pollution
is associated with water
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flowing the farming waste. As long as farmers use pesticides to destroy pests,
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they harm the rivers.
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important issue while many marine lives would be
underneath
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threat by these substances.
Although
people cannot omit all
pollution
causes and problems,
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with some
activities
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they can be reduced
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example,
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the
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car usage. We do not always need
cars
to reach a destination.
For instance
, if our workplace is near enough to walk to it, we can change our way of commuting, which could
also
benefit our body and reduce the traffic.
In addition
, farmers should be informed and taught despite using pesticides, and chemical substances,
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another way to kill pests. As a consequence, water would not be polluted by farmers,
besides
, people can provide eco-friendly products which
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suitable
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their diet
also
. In conclusion,
pollution
such
as air or water contaminated
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produces
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by humans
and
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cause
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many detrimental problems.
Nevertheless
, humans themselves can help
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the
producing
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of contamination by minimizing the chemical and mechanical things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • environmental problem
  • causes
  • solutions
  • industrial emissions
  • vehicular emissions
  • improper waste disposal
  • deforestation
  • stricter environmental regulations
  • renewable energy sources
  • waste management systems
  • planting
  • trees
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