Pollution is becoming a major environment problem. what are causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Nowadays all kinds of
pollution
affect environment
adversely. There are various sources of Add an article
the environment
pollution
such
as cars
and un appropriate
farming. Correct your spelling
unappropriate
However
, we can find some solution
to decrease the effect of these sources.
Travelling by Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
cars
has increased considerably which results in air Fix the agreement mistake
car
pollution
. If an area had a major number of cars
, the amount of fuel emission
would rise and make the air Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
containing
Wrong verb form
contain
of
carbon-dioxide. Remove the preposition
apply
This
problem affected adversely not only for
the planet earthChange preposition
apply
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
for
health. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, another type of pollution
is associated with water by
flowing the farming waste. As long as farmers use pesticides to destroy pests, Change preposition
apply
consequently
they harm the rivers. Add a comma
,consequently
This
work may not look an
important issue while many marine lives would be Change preposition
like an
underneath
threat by these substances.
Change preposition
under
Although
people cannot omit all pollution
causes and problems, but
with some Remove the conjunction
apply
activities
they can be reduced Add a comma
,activities
for
example, Add the comma(s)
,for
control
Wrong verb form
controlling
the
car usage. We do not always need Correct article usage
apply
cars
to reach a destination. For instance
, if our workplace is near enough to walk to it, we can change our way of commuting, which could also
benefit our body and reduce the traffic. In addition
, farmers should be informed and taught despite using pesticides, and chemical substances, implement
another way to kill pests. As a consequence, water would not be polluted by farmers, Fix the infinitive
to implement
besides
, people can provide eco-friendly products which is
suitable Correct subject-verb agreement
are
in
their diet Change preposition
for
also
.
In conclusion, pollution
such
as air or water contaminated which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
produces
by humans Wrong verb form
produced
and
Correct word choice
apply
cause
many detrimental problems. Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
Nevertheless
, humans themselves can help decreasing
the Wrong verb form
decrease
producing
of contamination by minimizing the chemical and mechanical things.Replace the word
production
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