People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives
In contemporary society, many
people
are confused about balancing their work
and family time
. Most of the time
, under
in the society deeply stressed from Change preposition
apply
work
, some people
are trapped and have to think we may figure out issue solutions, while others few people
achieve its goal, and this
essay discusses how to improve these issues.
On the one hand, one of the first
problems of the job marketing competitions
and ever Fix the agreement mistake
competition
surge
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surgeon
on
the unemployment rate. Most Change preposition
in
of
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employer
has to spend a lot of off-Add an article
the employer
work
time
to improve themself to get promotion
or Add an article
a promotion
high
salary. Correct article usage
a high
For example
, if someone is working in the hospitality industry, during the hotel peak seasons or holiday
period, some of the staff willing to work
holiday
can get double pay. Nowadays, especially for
some parents, they face Change preposition
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on
all Change preposition
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kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
bill
pay, Fix the agreement mistake
bills
include
children’s spending, house rental fee, tax pay, etc. Wrong verb form
including
Therefore
, when they have an opportunity earn
more income, I believed most Fix the infinitive
to earn
people
would give up holiday
time
rather than working
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work
in
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on
holiday
.
On the other hand
, moving to consider time
management to balance work
and leisure time
. In my thinking way, a possible solution to this
problem would be make
a list around the Change the verb form
make
schedule
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scheduled
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work hours
workhours
, Correct your spelling
work hours
write
down and highlight every important date, Correct word choice
and write
such
as family
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a family
member
birthday, or anniversary. Meanwhile, building Change noun form
member's
friendly
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a friendly
relationship
with co-workers, just in case exchange roster shift if something happens Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
in
out of the blue. What is more, one immediate practical solution is to set up the bottom line for some special Change preposition
apply
situation
no more Fix the agreement mistake
situations
work
to enjoy family time
first
.
To sum up, we may reasonable to arrange work
and leisure time
which able to do schedule list, under this
circumstance, we could find out organizer solution our lifetime.Submitted by ellayang_ on
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