SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT THERE SHOUD BE A FIXED PUNISHMENT FOR EACH TYPE OF CRIME. OTHERS FOT THAT THE CIRUMSTANCES OF AN OFFENCE SHOULD BE TAKEN IN TO ACCOUNT WHEN DECIDING ON A PUNISHMENT. DISCUSS BOTHE SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

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It is irrefutable that

crimes

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are burgeoning day by day in every country. An army of masses thinks that abuse should be fixed for all kinds of

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some people believe that circumstances should be analysed behind crime till decide the abuse. I think that situations should be the

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consideration before

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. I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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with, there are multifarious reasons that some people said fixed torture should be given to all kinds of criminal activities. The

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and the most reason is that

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would be reduced.

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, if all minor and major

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people are afraid to do a case in their life.

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, the constitution of the county would be strong. Due to

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, reason development of a nation can be seen and the nation would become safe.

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, looking towards the reasons and situations of the offender to give

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, if a culprit does snatching

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, the authority should look at the situation of his house the criminal belongs to a poor family

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why he is attempting snatching activity. In

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case, given capital or fixed

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is not good

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. ministry should give a chance to criminals to realise their mistakes.

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, sometimes minor violations are one by children

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as firing in a crowded place that harms the public it does not mean the law will give fixed

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to children because children are not enough mature at an early age they do not know about the outcomes of firing in a public place. To conclude, not only do positive results of fixed

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but it has detrimental effects

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on a criminal’s life.

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why the union should not fix forfeiture for all kinds of

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