Pesticides used to grow fruits and vegetables might cause some problems. What issues may they result in? How can we promote organic farming?

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in the world.
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for damaging the production of
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. One of
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is pests and vermin. Agriculturalists always have
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tried to defend their products from these.
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, they have utilized a diverse of
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to kill them, they have major negative effects on natural
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and healthy humans.
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effort to find the best ways
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the environment. In
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propose some solutions. Unfortunately, most
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have been using chemical poisons for keeping the cereals,
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and fruits. Because they are making an effort to increase their productions or to achieve more profit. But, these substances have many unhealthy
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on all of them.
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, it can kill not only the pests and vermin but
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.
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, the fruits and vegetables can be polluted. They can harm children and other creatures.
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, they should not spread and use
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of poisons.
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, Using these liquids and sprays can lead to producing
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greenhouse gases, air pollution and global warming
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. If
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agriculturists use
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of unfriendly environmental materials, they will emit toxic fume and gases in the air. In
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many countries, there are many strike rules for prohibitions
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using these substances. But, they
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these rules completely. Because
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there is not any viable alternative to them.
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sum up,
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, many farmers in order to rise up
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profit or productions used
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, it can have a main danger
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the environment. I believe that the government should encourage the people
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organic food and allocate enough budgets to produce organic food.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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