People often think about an ideal society, but most of the time fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

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they consider how to perform it. Personally,

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humanity

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of each person is to take the initiative in designing a valuable community. To achieve

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,

people

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should invest in education from an early age to steer precisely children’s

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long for a

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where everything met is wholesome but a great number of issues related to the environment and poverty still exist.

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phenomenon, if not prevented, may pose a threat to the planet. When

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aware of the impoverishment of those who are suffering from poor conditions or more and more creatures are on the verge of extinction, their compassion will

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and they genuinely want to figure out the solutions to the problems.

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, building an ideal

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is what

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can achieve

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humanity

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to care for miserable

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and back them up out of poverty. Owing to my aforementioned view of an ideal

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, I appreciate children’s early education. Their brain will be reinforced and take in healthy lessons through schooling.

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, parents just continuously nurture

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in their children and give them practical experiences.

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way, the children are likely to be beneficent and environmentally conscious

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when reaching adulthood and

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, they might be those who make a paradigm change

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society

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.

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, as usual, the coordination between

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and teachers to organize annual extracurricular activities

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as charity,

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trees to protect the environment. In conclusion, I contend that

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is a crucial factor in an ideal

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. The optimal way is to equip

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with a grasp of knowledge to ignite sympathy with them,

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nature and every creature on earth.