Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reason of immigration? To what concequences can it lead?
There is no doubt that
immigration
has significant
effect on Add an article
a significant
the
contemporary society. Each year more and more Correct article usage
apply
people
from all over the world decide to leave their home countries and move to another place. This
essay explore
some of the reasons and the consequences of Change the verb form
explores
immigration
.
In my view, the main consideration of changing people
's native place from third
world to developed countries is quality of Change the article
the third
life
and safety of the family for the present and the future. They get better employment oppochunities
and as a crucial result receive higher income for the covering cost of living and Correct your spelling
opportunities
a
comfortable Remove the article
apply
life
and give proper education to the children. Living in a wealthy country
always offer
a stable economy for them. Correct subject-verb agreement
offers
For example
, recently who settled in Canada from my native people
enjoy their life
delightfully. They explain their happiness stories on social media with pictures. Other reasons that whole families to
cross the border from Fix the infinitive
apply
Correct pronoun usage
their mother
mother land
are wars and Correct your spelling
motherland
varies
Replace the word
various
crisis
Fix the agreement mistake
crises
of
the Change preposition
in
country
. For instance
, many newspapers say that many Sri Lankan refugees have migrated for seeking security. They have moved to Gulf countries such
as Saudi Arabia and Oman for escaping from economic
crisis they faced begging in the year 2022.
Add an article
the economic
an economic
Nevertheless
, immigration
sometimes causes more issues than solving, resulting in negative aspects for both immigrate
and the new Replace the word
immigrants
country
. First
of all, most of the people
who come to another country
do not find the
jobs because of the lack of language skills and adaptation the newcomer faced. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
the authorities have to run for
various programmes Change preposition
apply
for
assistance Change preposition
to
help
Correct word choice
and help
for
those Change preposition
apply
people
. This
leads to tension in the
society. Correct article usage
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Secondly
, not all of
Change preposition
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refugees
receive proper food and medical care and they are at risk Add an article
the refugees
even
changing to a new Change preposition
of even
country
. This
shows many of them sustain medical issues such
as diabetes, fluctuating blood pressure and cardiac disease physically and anxiety or depression mentally. Some adults even though they have specialized
often do not get what they are looking for.
In conclusion, I think Wrong verb form
specialises
people
's immigration
offers a better life
. However
, life
, after migrate
might not always meet their expectations, so it is very important to consider all the possible outcomes from the problems and educate enough by themselves.Replace the word
migration
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