Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reason of immigration? To what concequences can it lead?

There is no doubt that
immigration
has
significant
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effect on
the
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contemporary society. Each year more and more
people
from all over the world decide to leave their home countries and move to another place.
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some of the reasons and the consequences of
immigration
. In my view, the main consideration of changing
people
's native place from
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world to developed countries is quality of
life
and safety of the family for the present and the future. They get better employment
oppochunities
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opportunities
and as a crucial result receive higher income for the covering cost of living and
a
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comfortable
life
and give proper education to the children. Living in a wealthy
country
always
offer
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a stable economy for them.
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, recently who settled in Canada from my native
people
enjoy their
life
delightfully. They explain their happiness stories on social media with pictures. Other reasons that whole families
to
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cross the border from
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mother land
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are wars and
varies
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crisis
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of
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the
country
.
For instance
, many newspapers say that many Sri Lankan refugees have migrated for seeking security. They have moved to Gulf countries
such
as Saudi Arabia and Oman for escaping from
economic
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the economic
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crisis they faced begging in the year 2022.
Nevertheless
,
immigration
sometimes causes more issues than solving, resulting in negative aspects for both
immigrate
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and the new
country
.
First
of all, most of the
people
who come to another
country
do not find
the
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jobs because of the lack of language skills and adaptation the newcomer faced.
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the authorities have to run
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various programmes
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assistance
help
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for
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those
people
.
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leads to tension in
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society.
Secondly
, not all
of
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refugees
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receive proper food and medical care and they are at risk
even
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changing to a new
country
.
This
shows many of them sustain medical issues
such
as diabetes, fluctuating blood pressure and cardiac disease physically and anxiety or depression mentally. Some adults even though they have
specialized
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often do not get what they are looking for. In conclusion, I think
people
's
immigration
offers a better
life
.
However
,
life
, after
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might not always meet their expectations, so it is very important to consider all the possible outcomes from the problems and educate enough by themselves.
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